Main idea 1:Surfing is amazing.

Proof (1): Surfing it is like you are floating on the water.

Proof (2): The moment you catch the wave that adrenaline rush that makes you keep on going.    

Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): Once I almost drowned but it did not stop my passion for surfing.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way) These is the reasons I think surfing is part of my life.

Surfing is amazing.Surfing it is like you are floating on the water. The moment you catch the wave that adrenaline rush that makes you keep on going.  Once I almost drowned but it did not stop my passion for surfing. These is the reasons I think surfing is part of my life.