Independent Summary: burger battle

I read Burger Battles. They were fighting about who made the first burger. These are the states that are fighting America, New York, Connecticut, Texas, and Wisconsin. Americans eat 14 billion burgers a year.

The Beach

The beach is my favorite place in the world. It is like it is a part of me because I can surf and skim board. When my friends are there it is so much more fun and we play tag,surf, and skim. When we have grill outs it is the most fun in the world. That is why I like the beach so much.

Main idea 1:Surfing is amazing.

Proof (1): Surfing it is like you are floating on the water.

Proof (2): The moment you catch the wave that adrenaline rush that makes you keep on going.    

Illustration or research point (has a time word and research example): Once I almost drowned but it did not stop my passion for surfing.

Conclusion (say your main idea again in a different and more interesting way) These is the reasons I think surfing is part of my life.

Surfing is amazing.Surfing it is like you are floating on the water. The moment you catch the wave that adrenaline rush that makes you keep on going.  Once I almost drowned but it did not stop my passion for surfing. These is the reasons I think surfing is part of my life.