The Secret Garden

     We are reading The Secret Garden in our literature group.  The main character is Mary.  She was born in India and no one liked her.  Her mom and dad didn't want to see her because she didn't look pretty.  Her Ayah mostly takes care of her, but she didn't really like Mary either.  Her Ayah gave her everything so Mary thought she could have everything and she  became spoiled and selfish.  One day there was a disease that killed her mom and dad, so she had to move over to her uncle's house in England.  Her uncle's house in on a moor.  A moor is like a large space of land with ponies, sheep, and lots of shrubs.  The house was very old and it is huge with over a hundred rooms.

Today my reading was about rainbow snake First this happened it had yellow strips and blue strips and red strips Second this happened they live in moss land Third this happened they eat fish and salamanders These are the things that happened in this chapter.

draft two

      I really liked the Air and Space Museum. I like it because the flight simulator and I did it with Alex. I kept spinning around and around and there was a button if you touch it, it will turn off the ride and Alex told  me to push the button and I said no.


    Also, I enjoyed Natural History Museum. I saw the mamoth and it was so big. I saw the hope diamond and it was so cool and the titano-boa and it is 48 feet and it is 3 feet wide that is so big and I saw the rock and minerals.


     Finally, I thought the wax museum was awesome. I saw all the presidents and I did a wax hand. He put me hand in cold water for five min then he put me hand in wax hot wax and in the cold water and then he got off. It was so cool.

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     I really liked the Air and Space Museum. I like it because the filet slimelter and I did it with Alex and I cuept spining arand and arand and thear was a buten if you tuchit it will turn off the rade and Alex told  me to push the buten and I sede nooooo.

    Also, I enjoyed Natural History Museum. I so the manth and it was so big and I saw the hope diamond and it was so cool and the titenobuo it is 48 feet and it is 3 feet wide that is so big and I saw the rock and minerals.

     Finally, I thought the wax museum was awesome. I sawn all the presnts and I did a wax hand and he put me hand in coold water for five min then he put me hand in wax hot wax and agen in the coold water and then he got off it was so cool.