Draft 2 9/21/11

     The red fish is named the red fish because on his tail it is red their is a black dot.  It's favorite food is sand fleas. They can swim 20 m.p.h -that is a fast fish! They can grow three feet -that is a big fish! One time I was fishing and  I caught a two foot red fish.  Me and my dad cooked it for dinner and was that a good fish to eat.  The next day my frind caught two red fish and they invited us to their house to eat some of the fish.   I ended up sleeping over and in the morning we all went fishing.

                                               By Zak Mignot 

Draft one

The red fish is named the red fish because on his tail their is a blake dot and its favret food is sand fles. They can swem 20 m.p.h that is a fast fish.They can grow 3 feet that is a big fish. One time i wus fishing and i coot a 2 foot red fish and me and my dad .Cooked it fore diner and wus that a good fish to eat and the next day my frind coot 2 red fish and. they invidid us to ther house to eat some of the fish and endid up i slep over and in the morning we all went fishing.

                                               By Zak Mignot 

Draft 2

   The pencil is a good invention. Without the pencil you could not erase.If you mess up you cannot erase and with a pen. If you mess up you will have to start all over. Sometimes the lead breaks and then you will have to sharpen the pencil. This is way I chose the pencil as my invention. 

                                                                  By Zak Mignot

draft one

The pencil is a good invention. Because without the pencil you could not erase.If you mess up you can erase and with a pen  if you mess up you will have to start all over. but sometimes the led bricks and then you will have to sharpen the pencil and this is way i chose the pencil as  my invention. 

                                                                  by zak mignot

draft 2

This is Zak talking and i went deep sea fishing and my dad says "did you get any bites?" and i said "sadly no", suddenly the captain caught a fish! A 30 pounder! And right when we were about to sail to shore....We feel a shake on my rod, And its taking the line, three min. later we have the fish in the boat and we sail into shore. Wow theres a huge crowd! And one lady crowd with a apple green shirt, plain blue jeans and brown hair in a bun said to my dad "wow did you catch that huge fish!?", My dad chuckled, "ha ha nope my son caught that humongous fish!", the lady glared, "sure he did!.

big wring 2

big wring

This is Zak talking and i went deep sea fishing and my dad says "did you get any bites?" and i said "sadly no", suddenly the captin caught a fish! A 30 pounder! And right when we were about to sail to shore....We feel a shake on my rod, And its taking the line, three min. later we have the fish in the boat and we sail into shore. Wow theres a huge crowd! And one lady crowd with a apple green shirt, plain blue jeans and brown hair in a bun said to my dad "wow did you catch that huge fish!?", My dad chuckled, "haha nope my son caught that humongouse fish!", the lady glared, "sure he did!.

big wring

This is Zak talking and i went deep sea fishing and my dad says "did you get any bites?" and i said "sadly no", suddenly the captin caught a fish! A 30 pounder! And right when we were about to sail to shore....We feel a shake on my rod, And its taking the line, three min. later we have the fish in the boat and we sail into shore. Wow theres a huge crowd! And one lady crowd with a apple green shirt, plain blue jeans and brown hair in a bun said to my dad "wow did you catch that huge fish!?", My dad chuckled, "haha nope my son caught that humongouse fish!", the lady glared, "sure he did!.